The first crit:
I've got not a bad feedback. After talking in a group we discussed the main points of my work. I think the feedback was fair enough. I only had two of the designs planed than. I enjoyed that she liked the idea that i had.
My own reflection on the work:
The final crit feedback:
I've got two sheets, both basically saying the same. At this point I already knew what I did wrong and what went wrong. I wasn't surprised of the weaknesses that were in my work. I knew that the pieces don't work as a one solid series. If I revisited this brief as I already pointed out in my earlier posts I would create an identity for all the products as if they were from one compony of 'Nation of Procrastination'. I even thought of the brand name and all that. The only problem is that I really put a lot of thought into my pieces and screen-printing took me a lot of time so i was short on the actual time for designing and design considerations.
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